'Redemption'- The Deep Thinker

Ola amigos! Someone (Well, me only) very well said that Poetry is an Art, of creatively using literary& grammatical elements to describe any idea. Just some time ago, I came across a word known as 'redemption', and I've been thinking about it from a long, long time, then I thought MAUKA BHI HAI, DASTOOR BHI HAI, CHAUKA KYU NA MAAR LIYA JAYE (Yep, I think a lot). Well Well Well, You know the tagline, don't ya:

Redemption

The unstoppable forces won’t stop.

The immovable rocks won’t move.

I know for a fact that they won’t.

Over positive spurs may claim that but I DON’T.

 

But one thing which I crave for, is redemption,

For I know, that it IS plausible in today’s world.

Converting a walking dead into a delirious person IS NOT redemption,

But to take care that a plucked flower doesn’t wither away IS, redemption.

 

World sets its eyes on the thousands of firsts,

But blinks when it comes to the low- ranked redeeemers.

RESPECT; IMMENSE RESPECT,

The latter section must receive some of that. too. 
- The Deep Thinker



Hello Mates!! My Blog 'Deep Thought Poems' is a way to expose my poetic works to the world. Hope you like 'em. Any form of constructive Feedback would be appreciated.

Thank You, 

T.D.T.


Comments

  1. Mayank JangidFebruary 15, 2021 at 10:37 PM

    Did a Poetic Revolution occur in 2021, you are writing poems with the speed sound! Keep it up!

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  2. UnknownFebruary 16, 2021 at 11:20 PM

    The four you were trying to hit turned out to be a six.! Really great effort.!!

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  3. KunalFebruary 17, 2021 at 1:02 AM

    Really wonderful !! Keep it up ....

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  4. Mayank GoelFebruary 17, 2021 at 2:48 AM

    Nailed It!!!

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  5. Chirag RastogiFebruary 18, 2021 at 8:30 AM

    Beautifully done ������

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