'Gone with the Gust'- The Deep Thinker

Heyya,!! How do you feel when your talent gets unrecognized sometimes? This plight situation occurs with many just due to the lack of resources! Doesn't your heart melt on just visualising the situation?
I, through a poem, have attempted to express my views on this appalling truth of today's time. Let's get the coffee ready and start reading:-

‘Gone with the Gust’

O cruel world, ease the pain..!!
Future Talent will go all in vain.
You may know the feeling when,
One transits an undesired lane.
 
An innocent soul took up entity,
Unknown to your inhumane identity,
He committed the sin of possessing a dream,
Started growing his dream’s intensity.
 
His roots were feeble, very weak,
Neither were there any nutrients to grow a leek.
What you considered as a fake substitute Shorea,
Was the real, durable and valuable Teak.
 
You didn’t let him think, or choose,
You didn’t let the younger one’s interests ooze.
He was held by your invisible, but  brawny force,
You had pre- decided that, he just had to loose.
 
There was he, with all the gloom and the rust,
With his face, encompassed with dust.
With a hulking bag on the chest
And his dreams, which were, gone with the gust.

- The Deep Thinker



Hello Mates!! My Blog 'Deep Thought Poems' is a way to expose my poetic works to the world. Hope you like 'em. Any form of constructive Feedback would be appreciated.

Thank You 


 
 
 

Comments

  1. Mayank JangidOctober 8, 2020 at 5:48 PM

    The name of your blog is very appropriate as all of your poems have a deep meaning or thought. I really appreciate your efforts and hope you keep writing like this 😊

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  2. LUCKY JOURNALSOctober 9, 2020 at 6:05 AM

    Your words are very precious and are pen weighing. I loved your poems and your every letter is worth praising.

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  3. UnknownOctober 30, 2020 at 6:58 AM

    Why do you I have a feeling that this poem depicts your anger on reservation?

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  4. UnknownOctober 30, 2020 at 9:11 AM

    Crafted with deep thinking

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